Started by EjectedStar, 08 Sep 2021, 03:05
Quote from: EjectedStar on 27 Sep 2021, 22:41Voting shall now commence until the end of September 3rd!
Quote from: Sinitrena on 30 Sep 2021, 01:09Too true, that. One never sees ones one errors - and especially those that are very easily spotted by someone else. And I'd never say there are none in my own writing. Hide: ShowHideI did read your comment. I'm not sure there was something over-the-top happening towards the end, though. Everything follows a logical progression (an outlandish one, but still logical in the context of the story). I think it would feel stronger in a visual medium, and probably less repetetive.
QuoteIt's a little depressing that Pete seems perfectly content to perpetuate the cycle....
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