Started by Baron, 28 Jun 2021, 02:39
Quote from: Mandle on 30 Jun 2021, 10:09Something in the works.
Quote from: SinitrenaStupot: I love the idea and the concept of the story, so much so that it ended up as my favorite. Nevertheless, there are some things I think could be a bit better, first and foremost that the story leaves too many questions unanswered: What did actually happen, being the main one. Also, is this new job of Gayle something that is normal in this world, or is she the only person doing it? Again, the consept of a different kind of psychic is great and has a whole lot of potential and I'd kinda like to meet this character again.
Quote from: Sinitrena on 16 Jul 2021, 11:48The main part just seems missing, though. We never even learn when Edward was taken or what it is he can do (what does "fix him" mean - we never get an answer) or how he ended up back with his father.
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